Overview: Narrative point-of-view (POV) is the perspective from which a story is told. It shapes how readers experience the story and how much they know about the characters and events. Choosing the right POV is a crucial step in planning your story, as it influences the reader’s connection to the characters and the way the plot unfolds. In this article, we’ll explore the different types of POVs and how to choose the best one for your picture book.
Understanding the Different Types of Narrative Point-of-View
1. First-Person POV
First-person point-of-view uses pronouns like “I,” “me,” “we,” and “us.” It’s told from the narrator’s perspective, giving readers a direct view into their thoughts, feelings, and experiences. First-person can create a strong, intimate connection between the narrator and the reader, but it’s limited to what the narrator knows and experiences.
- Pronouns used: I, me, we, us.
- Perspective: The narrator’s personal view of the story.
Example:
“I watched the sun rise over the hills, feeling the warmth on my face.”
Questions to Ask:
- Is my story better served by a close, personal perspective?
- Do I want the reader to see and feel everything through the narrator’s eyes?
2. Second-Person POV
Second-person point-of-view addresses the reader directly, using the pronoun “you.” This POV can make the reader feel more involved in the story, as if they’re a character within it. However, second-person is less common in picture books and can be challenging to maintain consistently.
- Pronoun used: You.
- Perspective: Addresses the reader as if they’re part of the story.
Example:
“You step into the forest, feeling the cool breeze against your skin.”
Questions to Ask:
- Do I want to directly engage the reader and make them feel like they’re part of the story?
- Can I maintain second-person POV without it becoming awkward or forced?
3. Third-Person Limited POV
Third-person limited POV uses names or personal pronouns like “he,” “she,” or “they” and tells the story from the perspective of a single character. The reader sees and experiences the world through this character’s eyes but doesn’t know what other characters are thinking or feeling unless it’s shown through action or dialogue.
- Pronouns used: He, she, they.
- Perspective: Focuses on the thoughts and feelings of one character.
Example:
“Emma wondered what was behind the locked door, but she didn’t dare ask.”
Questions to Ask:
Does my story benefit from following a single character closely?
Do I want to limit the reader’s knowledge to what one character knows?
4. Third-Person Omniscient POV
Third-person omniscient POV uses names or pronouns but has access to the thoughts, feelings, and actions of all characters. The narrator knows everything that’s happening in the story, offering a more complete view of the world and characters.
- Pronouns used: He, she, they.
- Perspective: All-knowing narrator who understands everything happening in the story.
Example:
“Emma worried about the locked door, while James, in the other room, felt a sense of dread he couldn’t explain.”
Questions to Ask:
- Does my story require a broader perspective that includes multiple characters’ thoughts and feelings?
- Do I want to offer readers more information than the characters themselves know?
5. Third-Person Objective POV
Third-person objective POV describes what’s happening in the story without revealing any character’s thoughts or feelings. It’s like an outsider looking in, describing the events without commentary or insight into the characters’ minds.
- Pronouns used: He, she, they.
- Perspective: Observes and reports what’s happening without revealing thoughts or feelings.
Example:
“Emma glanced at the door, then turned away, her expression unreadable.”
Questions to Ask:
- Does my story benefit from a neutral, unbiased viewpoint?
- Do I want the reader to interpret characters’ actions and emotions on their own?
How to Choose the Right POV for Your Story
Step 1: Consider the Type of Story You’re Telling
Think about the themes and style of your story. Do you want readers to experience everything from a single character’s perspective, or do you need a broader view? Are you looking for an intimate connection or a more detached, observational style?
Step 2: Decide How Much the Reader Should Know
The POV you choose will determine how much information the reader has access to. Decide whether you want the reader to know everything that’s happening (omniscient), or just what one character knows (limited).
Step 3: Try Writing a Scene in Different POVs
Experiment with writing a scene in different POVs to see how each one feels. This can help you determine which POV best suits your story and creates the effect you’re looking for.
Step 4: Consider Your Audience
Think about your target audience and how they might engage with different POVs. For picture books, a more straightforward and accessible POV is often preferred, but don’t be afraid to experiment if it suits your story.
Final Notes:
Choosing the right narrative point-of-view is essential for shaping your story and guiding the reader’s experience. By understanding the strengths and limitations of each POV, you can decide which perspective best aligns with your story’s goals. Use Flow to experiment and plan your POV, and find the voice that brings your story to life.
